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Dani
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Location: Sweden.
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The hardest goodbye.

I accidentally hit post (the other thread) and I can't delete it for some reason, so I'll just make this one with the right titel instead. It's my first in years and it feels so good to just connect with yourself that way you only can when you're truly miserable

Enjoy! Would love any kind of feedback of course


You were my walking mirror.
But with days the reflection changed.
It wasn't only dirty, it was just you.
Who was he, the man I thought I knew?
You turned the good things into bad,
I changed my frustration into passion.
I wasn't feeling love,
But becoming it was my way to suffocate your hate.
The moment I said one day at the time,
Was the day I knew you weren't just mine.
What was it with you that made me stay?
And why could I never answer that?
My biggest mistakes were the excuses you planted.
With tears they grew bigger day by day.
So I started picking them up for you,
And made you a bouquet.
All of this time the alarms were loud.
Instead of turning them down you changed the frequency.
Now it was just "baby you know it's you and I,
Until the end of time".
For you I was too much and not enough.
So you took my life and smiled.
I smiled back because I was finally free.
But I still wonder why you were the hardest goodbye.

Last edited by Dani on 09-12-2017 at 09:23 PM

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Re: The hardest goodbye.

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Originally posted by Dani
I changed my frustration into passion.
I wasn't feeling love,
But becoming it was my way to suffocate your hate.



The part that gets me the most, I think....
Except it never works

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Re: Re: The hardest goodbye.

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The part that gets me the most, I think....
Except it never works



What never works?☺️

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purple18
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i've only read this now and i felt every single word with pain and anger but also relief. the best part is when it is over (not your poem but the abuse you've been through)

i hope you get through this phase as quickly as possible <3

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i've only read this now and i felt every single word with pain and anger but also relief. the best part is when it is over (not your poem but the abuse you've been through)

i hope you get through this phase as quickly as possible <3





Thank you Diana!

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