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Bitter Sweet Rain.

It's been a while since I was active on this part of the forum, but to catch up on my long lost inspiration, I decided to post an old poem I wrote back in... I really don't remember..? 2006? Gosh my memory is so bad. I know it used to be on here, but I can't be bothered searching for it. Luckily I found it after searching several hours on my external harddrive.

This was written during one of my hardest times, I know that. I was confused and at a very dark place. Everything felt hopeless, no matter how hard I tried.

Feedback is greatly appreciated. ♥

Falling from the sky, leaving traces on my skin
The sound of the cold rain, so peaceful and shy
Feeding my poor soul, letting me forget my pain
Iím stumbling around, avoiding the holes
Trying to forget, whatís dragging me down
Wanting to get away, and erase my regrets
Being free like a bird, and release my weighs
The soothing sensation, playing with my soul so blurred
Once a morbid state of mind, a feeling of lust and temptation
A never ending freak show, searching for answers I canít find
What do I see? Somehow I will never know
Iím no longer lonely, I feel so free
Iíll finally be released, floating around disembodied
No one can see or hear, Iíve been deceased
Iím longing for all eternity, Iíve conquered my fears
My heart is no longer pumping, just let me be
Iíll return to the darkness, as Iím on the wage of jumping
This twisted illusion of mine, I must confess
This anger inside of me growing, I need to unwind
Iíve shed my last tear, as the wind continues on blowing
My destiny lies ahead of me, I donít want to be spared
The rain is soaking my clothes, Iím blind and cannot see
Riding an emotional rollercoaster of love, and this nobody knows
Morphine and chocolate, whatever itís made of
The taste so delicate and pure, itís all in my booklet
My journal who I gave myself into, hello bonjour
The edge feels so soft underneath my feet, Iím freeing myself from you
The sweet sound of the rain, drowning my heartbeats
Hearing the frothy ocean underneath, Iím not insane
Getting ready to give up myself, Iím gritting my teeth
Closing my eyes, tired of being the remaining book in the shelf
Spreading my wings, as Iím leaving in disguise
Iím falling, those were the things
I never told you, my darling
Slipping away from life, saying adieu
Itís kissing my wet lips, freeing myself from my knife
There you have it, youíre watching me slip
Tried to hold on for so long, as Iím about to commit
My own sweet suicide, youíre trying to figure out what went wrong
Iím not the one to tell, you never saw me hide
Sooner or later Iíll hit the bottom, goodbye and farewell.

© Maren Eline Aune

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