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lonly_94
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My shelter&My lonely girl

Lonely girl, are you still alone?
Didn't you find a place to go?
Why are you sitting here staring at the phone,
You know they won't answer anymore.

My shelter, the useless struggle between life and death,
Is a part of me that's always down in depress.
I gave my all, but they didn't see,
Now I'm left hangning.

Lonely girl, you know we are not ok?
I hate to see you act this way.
And why do you need to be right,
This isn't only your fight.

My shelter, I'm sorry but I always got my arguments,
They are driving me into catastrophic violence,
And I would never put my guard down and excuse,
Without a reason why they act like fools.

Lonely girl, don't you bring me those lies,
We are both in the same crise.
And I won't loose because of you,
Sorry but you need to stay true.

My shelter, I always did what I thought was right,
I don't know how this road got me without sight,
It's a long way down and I can't see anything bright,
It's all blure in my none fairy tale life.

Lonely girl, are you still alone?
Didn't you find a place to go?
Why are you sitting here staring at the phone,
You know they won't answer anymore.

My shelter, I need you to say goodbye,
You only put me down in lies.
My shelter, I don't need to carry your voice,
You got me arrested and I got no choice,
Than to leave me alone,
And burry you in my soul.

Lonely girl, don't you say I'm bad,
I'm your only friend when it's this sad,
Lonely girl, I'm beggning don't you forget,
I am the only one you know left.

My shelter, My lonely girl,
I was never ment to carry myself in this world

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Anacreon
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Re: My shelter&My lonely girl

beautiful. Your mastery of the poetic craft is increasing...getting better all the time

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lonly_94
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Thank you Tony, very very very much means alot to me!

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I can relate to it a lot...is beautiful

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quote:
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I can relate to it a lot...is beautiful
Thank you very much, means alot...<3

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