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aussiefotogirl
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Smile The Secret Shore - Poem

THE SECRET SHORE


Where does it begin
And how or where may it end or bend
This thing called living

Is it about the giving
Or about just bein
Of how do we know of livin
Is finding our way just a beginning

Oh how many waves and currents to some distant shore
Which one to ride amongst these aspirational tides
Yet will it flow back here or there
Lord only knows
Oh but I so want more
To breath from some secret shore

Yet will it come from some far off shore
Evermore my deepest wish
To ride the tide to the secret shore
Yet will it be but nevermore
These hopes and dreams for something more
Oh cuz I so want more
To breath from the illusive shore.





By Aussiefotogirl

31 August 2007

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lozza81
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what happened to the other thread of this 1?

it's a really good poem by the way, i like it

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Smile

Hey Lozza,

Thanks very much for all your help yesterday with the little "tests".

Greatly appreciated.

You were so right on the money with what I was doing there.

Much Thanks

CHEERS

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you're so very welcome

anything to help a friend

u got any more poems for us to read?

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Wink Thanks again buddy !

Hi. Again you read my mind. Yeah, the poem is back in this thread. A little embarrassing there maybe with the test page practices, so I cleaned it up a bit (as intended from before I began).

Just hadn't expected to get so much excellend (needed) help.

Thanks again buddy !!!!!!


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Smile Soulmate Spirit

There was this quick one I wrote the next day.




Your spirit burns bright
I see thru to your inner light
But how lonely is the night

Afraid to share
Afraid of the stare
And afraid of the glare

Yet through all our fears
And through all this pain
We both cry all the same.





[1/9/07]

[Notes - The initial inspiration for this goes back to times past.]

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excellent

here's one that I've just written

she sleeps so
soundly
so softly
at the end of
the bed

moving around her
to not make a noise
that will
disturb her
sleeping
so soundly
so softly

with a loud
clap
the thunder
breaks the night
and she awakes
from her slumber

~ Lauren, 09/09/07

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Sweet. Thanks so much for sharing. Any more ?

For me, find I usually need to sit down somewhere quiet, and take myself away from things (literally and physically), and like away from home to a more private place, and like to the park or something.

So perhaps next time I'm at the park I might sit and see what comes out (if anything loll). Hopefully the creative streek hasn't dried up yet, ha ha.

There's probably a little more hiding in there somewhere if I'm brave enough to tap into it.


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hahaha me too

sometimes if I come up with the first line

the rest will just flow along

a bit like word vomit

hahahaha

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Yeewwh .. the very thought ... ha ha

(Just been having a quick lunch snack too ..).

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THE SWING - TO BE INVISIBLE, OR TO BE KNOWN

THE SWING - TO BE INVISIBLE, OR TO BE KNOWN


The swing, the inner drive
To be invisible
or not to be so

To hide
or to seek

To reach
or pull back

To reject
or to be rejected
or both

To risk, to trust
or to not

To become known
or not

Which is it comes first
Is this part of the question

Is to get too close to the flame
the truth, the pain, or the game
to be merely singed
or forever burn

Your script
... Your journey
.......Your choice
..........If that is what you really yearn




By Aussiefotogirl

9 September 2007

[Version 1.1]


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I like it

excellent

did u see some of the others I wrote today?

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Smile

Hi buddy.

So sorry, been a little tired, and feeling a little off/crook/distracted last day or so.

Will have a look around for more of your poems - as I'm sure its pretty good.

Cheers

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quote:
Originally posted by lozza81
she sleeps so
soundly
so softly
at the end of
the bed

moving around her
to not make a noise
that will
disturb her
sleeping
so soundly
so softly

with a loud
clap
the thunder
breaks the night
and she awakes
from her sleep
and peers at you
from the corner of her eye

~ Lauren, 09/09/07




Really like this above version too.

(I knew that was about a pet !)

Love your "The Night" poem too.


Your have a puss cat hey ? Love cats too. Mine snuggles in bed too. What kind of cat ?

Cheers

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yeah my cat is my baby, love her to death, her name is Miss Suki Lala, this is her pic

thanx, I am glad u like my poems

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