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I-Love-Pink247
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Registered: Oct 2007
Location: Ireland
Posts: 806

until my death

really not happy with this...dont think its finished yet..whatever


Words cant explain
how i feel for you.
you are in my thoughts
in all that i do.

if i never found you
i would never know
what real love feels like
so please dont go.

my life is complete
now that you're here,
it has been amazing
just to have you near.

my life has changed
and thats thanks to you,
i am ever grateful
for all that you do.

you make me feel loved
and like i belong somewhere,
its more than enough,
just to know that you care.

if i could see you now,
i would tell you i love you,
and i would wait forever
for you to say it too.

i say it and i mean it
from the bottom of my heart.
i hope we stay together
and never grow apart.

i would give up all i have,
to be with you all my years,
you have given me so much,
you kissed away my tears.

i have fallen in love,
and now my only fear
is that you will leave,
when i need you here.

i need to hear your voice
and hold your hand in mine.
i need to feel your touch
and know everything is fine.

i could cry to my eyes sting,
i could write to my hand is sore
but in the end its down to love
and i will love you forever more.

my heart is yours,
i give it to you,
im fully devoted
theres nothing more i can do.

you are the one i love
from now until i die,
i promise you my heart..
i promise i wont lie.

i promise i will love you
until i breath my last breathe.
i am here by your side
from now until my death.

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Little_Peculiar
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Registered: Feb 2008
Location: Sweden
Posts: 18554

wonderful.. just too fcking wonderful

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Amy-LouiseOx
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Registered: Dec 2007
Location: Greater Manchester, UK
Posts: 5241

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, Becky that is beautiful, amazing (:
Awwww (: xx

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tdkeirns
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Registered: Jan 2007
Location: Ohio
Posts: 1575

Beautiful!

<3

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lonly_94
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Wow I love this one,
You didn't just wrote what you feel, you wrote what your heart says and that always brings out the best!

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~~Blackrose~~
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Location: A Dark Place, Wanna Come?
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wow, that's just so beautiful. i wish there's someone out there, who will write something as beautiful as this about me. i think i'd be the happiest person in the world.
great stuff!!!

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I-Love-Pink247
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Registered: Oct 2007
Location: Ireland
Posts: 806

quote:
Originally posted by Little_Peculiar
wonderful.. just too fcking wonderful


Thank you darling<3

quote:
Originally posted by Amy-LouiseOx
Awwwwwwwwwwwww, Becky that is beautiful, amazing (:
Awwww (: xx



thanks amy (: xx

quote:
Originally posted by tdkeirns
Beautiful!

<3



thank you

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I-Love-Pink247
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Location: Ireland
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quote:
Originally posted by lonly_94
Wow I love this one,
You didn't just wrote what you feel, you wrote what your heart says and that always brings out the best!



awww thanks <3




quote:
Originally posted by ~~Blackrose~~
wow, that's just so beautiful. i wish there's someone out there, who will write something as beautiful as this about me. i think i'd be the happiest person in the world.


awww that means alot..thank you

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Little_Peculiar
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Registered: Feb 2008
Location: Sweden
Posts: 18554

it still makes me cry like a baby.. amazing. totally amazing.
youre my little poet<3

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Anacreon
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Registered: Jul 2007
Location: Ubi caritas est
Posts: 1503

Beautiful. A mix of honesty and eloquence. I hope the person this is meant for gets to read it

re the poem not being finished, I think Pablo Neruda once said, "A poem is never finished, only abandoned..."

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